well, I mean it's just game grumps and its not really animated.

for a first go this might not be so bad but i'd say you still need more practice

ok ok ok!! well....damn.

First of all I really wasnt expecting to like it as much as I did, the only reason you got a 3 and not a 5 is because the art is very lacking.
but well let me be frank, brilliant message especially to all the content creators that get very upset over peoples criticism of their work.

Now aside from the writing, dialogue, etc, let me analyze it from an artist perspective.
Style - 4/10: you seem to have your own style but still under developed. study some anatomy, do some figure drawing. also your backgrounds are just photos, which aren't bad but it feels more like you do it because your nervous to do them yourself.

Color - 5/10: colors are very simple, explore more.

Movement - 5/10: I'm a huge stickler for good motion and movement. a good book to get to make things clear is "The Animators Survival Kit" by Richard WIlliams.

keep trying, you have a great sense of humor and you put a lot of energy into your voice acting, just work on your art and you'll be amazing!